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50 pages 1 hour read

Ian McEwan

Sweet Tooth

Fiction | Novel | Adult | Published in 2012

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Chapters 9-12Chapter Summaries & Analyses

Chapter 9 Summary

The next night, Serena goes to a concert with Shirley. She notes a lingering tension between the two friends, though she believes that Shirley’s political beliefs will mature into something more believable. Rumors among colleagues suggest that Shirley has been recruited for an important assignment, but Serena is determined not to ask about it. Instead, they gossip about burgeoning office romances. Midway through the conversation, Shirley tells Serena to maintain a smile. They are being watched, she announces, and then she reveals that she has been fired. Shirley explains that she was asked about Serena by Nutting, Tapp, and others, who then wanted her to test Serena’s political loyalties by engaging her in a challenging conversation. Her anecdote about East Germany was a lie, but she felt so ashamed that she refused to reveal Serena’s reaction to the men at MI5. Now, Shirley wants to know why they were so interested in Serena, but Serena feels too angry and paranoid to divulge anything. They find themselves in a stalemate. Shirley refuses to say exactly why she was fired and Serena refuses to say why she was of interest to MI5. Shirley leaves without another word.

Later that night, Serena reads another of Haley’s short stories, about a mysterious, unassuming man named Neil Carder who lives alone in a large house. He inherited a large sum of money unexpectedly and is now unsure how to spend it. He is “a dull fellow and his life was making him duller” (71). One day, he notes the arrangement of a group of mannequins in a store window. The odd positioning of one female mannequin catches his eye and he begins to obsess over it. Eventually, he purchases the mannequin and takes it home. Serena pauses the story to drink a cup of tea. Still a little tipsy from the bar, she warns herself about feeling paranoid. She dismisses the idea of a microphone hidden in her room and does not want her grip on reality to slip in the manner of Neil Carder. She returns to the story, in which Carder names the mannequin Hermione after his ex-wife. He dresses the mannequin, makes it dinner, and then takes it into his bed. Carder’s brief, intense romantic affair with the mannequin lasts a few days. He becomes paranoid that Hermione is thinking of someone else. He takes out his anger on the mannequin, breaks it into pieces, and then throws it out with the garbage. Carder continues to live his lonely, dull life and learns nothing from the experience.

Chapter 10 Summary

Max shows Serena his small new office. He provides her with paperwork for the Freedom International Foundation, a registered charity with the supposed aim of promoting “excellence and freedom of expression in the arts everywhere in the world” (76) by helping artists who live in countries with restrictive, authoritarian governments. Serena notices that Max is slowly beginning to follow her advice and looks better as a result. She asks him about Shirley, but he claims to know nothing about her dismissal. They talk about Sweet Tooth, an operation which will help MI5 to distinguish itself in the world of anti-communist propaganda and better the bloated, bureaucratic efforts of MI6 and other agencies. Max admits that the scheme essentially blackmails writers into not revealing the embarrassing source of their funding. Serena begins to feel as though Max is not entirely committed to the mission, and he confesses that he is of the opinion that Sweet Tooth should focus on non-fiction. At the same time, she realizes that any romantic relationship between them is no longer viable, at least in Max’s view.

Serena shows Max the scrap of paper she found in the safehouse. He seems to link the matter to Shirley’s firing, but he refuses to say any more. Though she is told that she cannot keep the piece of paper, Serena takes it anyway. They return to Sweet Tooth. Serena speaks effusively about Haley’s skill, and they discuss the irresistible sum which he will be offered per year to write a novel. Max reminds Serena to “play hard to get” (79), rather than immediately offering Haley everything. At the end of the meeting, Max reveals that he is engaged to a doctor named Ruth. Afterward, he admits that he does not like Haley’s work, though Serena suspects that he does not like Haley. As he tries to end the meeting, Serena tells him about her recent paranoia, including the bookmark and the feeling that she is being watched. He warns her to be careful, as people who feel paranoid about being followed can act so strangely that they merit being followed. Serena leaves the office, bristling with anger.

Chapter 11 Summary

Serena drafts a letter to send to Haley, but it must pass through several levels of bureaucracy whereupon it receives many slight alterations. Eventually, the letter is posted and, when Haley returns from vacation, he responds with a short note suggesting that he and Serena meet in his office to discuss the Foundation’s proposal. Serena travels south from London to Brighton on a warm day in October. She crosses the university campus to Haley’s office and, as she arrives in front of his door, she wonders whether the real Haley will measure up to the version of the man she has constructed based on his writing. She has re-read his journalism pieces on the train, articles in which Haley criticizes oppressive communist regimes. She knocks and enters the office.

Serena is confused to find that Haley is a small, pale, slender man with long hair in a cramped, messy office. He welcomes her in, and she soon launches into an explanation of the Foundation’s supposed goals. Haley interrupts and begins to question Serena about her own life. She lies about certain details, though tells the truth about others. Aware that Haley has taken control of the conversation, she tries to assert herself. Haley asks for her opinion of his work. Serena confesses that the short stories are “utterly brilliant” (86) and Haley flinches, becoming lost for words. They discuss his work, and she notices that he craves praise. Serena outlines the terms of the proposal. Haley seems intrigued, but he suggests that the offer seems too good to be true. Serena pushes him to accept, and Haley proposes that he visit the Foundation’s offices in London. They share an unexpectedly sensual handshake before a loud knock at the door brings the meeting to an end.

Chapter 12 Summary

Serena rides the train back to London and tries to assure herself that she has done well. Later, she re-reads one of his short stories. This story concerns a French teacher at an English school named Sebastian Morel, who is disillusioned by his work and struggling to keep his small family afloat. One evening, Sebastian is mugged in the street while carrying almost all the money he had saved to buy Christmas presents. The incident forces him to confront his typical left-wing beliefs about the causes and nature of crime and poverty. The fallout of the mugging destroys the marriage and deepens his loathing for his work. One day, Sebastian’s wife reports a break-in at their home. Their few valuable possessions have been taken and insurance covers only a fraction of the financial value and none of the sentimental value of the items. A police investigation eventually reveals that Sebastian’s wife sold all the supposedly stolen items. Rather than confronting his wife, Sebastian finds that the revelation invigorates him. His wife is almost a stranger, so their revitalized romance seems like an affair to him. Sebastian and his wife have sex, interrupted only by a plaintive cry from their daughter in the next room. The pause is only short, and they resume the pleasurable activity, a pleasure “so pointed it was a reminder of pain” (96).

Chapters 9-12 Analysis

Haley’s short stories are summarized by Serena, who provides her emotional insight and interpretation into each one. The stories give her an idea of Haley which exists beyond the person she knows. Emotions such as jealousy and actions such as infidelity are invested into his characters, but she is yet to find these in the actual Haley. As a result, she is left trying to piece together the disparate parts of Haley’s life to assemble a fuller, more comprehensive idea of the man as informed by his literature. These renegade qualities which are so clearly expressed by the characters disrupt the tender, loving idea of the man that she knows. In the same way, Haley’s stories disrupt the narrative structure of Sweet Tooth. Entire chapters are dedicated to the summaries of his short stories, meaning that Serena’s life is set aside while she relates and analyzes Haley’s work. The short stories as disruptions to the narrative mirror Serena’s attempts to understand her lover. Just as her thoughts are put on hold when she reads or re-reads a story, the narrative itself takes a pause to consider Haley’s character.

These disruptions become part of a wider relationship between Serena, fiction, and men. She reads many books and has a clear understanding of what she does and does not like. Though she does not like to admit it, she prefers when a story ends with a marriage or a declaration of love. This satisfying emotional conclusion provides closure to a woman who lacked definitive emotional validation as a child and whose relationships have often been built on mistruths. Serena’s affair with Tony was predicated on its secrecy and ruined by the apparent problems it caused for his marriage. Her relationship with Haley is tender and loving, but she has lied to him about her role in his rise to literary prominence. Serena seeks out happy endings in novels even though her actual actions ensure that her own relationships can never end so neatly. For all her opinions about how literature should work, she takes none of her own advice.

Max’s engagement is a shock to Serena. She resents the fledgling affection she held for Max, wondering whether he was testing her suitability for Sweet Tooth. The existence of his engagement was a secret which he withheld from her and which changes the nature of their relationship. The engagement foreshadows the truth that Serena will keep hidden from Haley. Her job at MI5 is as much of an issue as Max’s engagement. For all of Serena’s anger and resentment toward Max, she will find herself swept up in the same mistake. Max’s engagement (and the eventual end of the engagement) provides Serena with an insight into the ways in which secrets and lies can destroy a relationship. But while she struggles to deal with her emotions toward Max, she does not take these lessons and apply them to her own life. Serena, in many ways, faces a constant struggle to modify her behavior based on her experiences, treating life like the disposable fiction which she enjoys so much.

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