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Josh Malerman

Incidents Around the House

Fiction | Novel | Adult | Published in 2024

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Chapters 11-19Chapter Summaries & Analyses

Chapter 11 Summary

Bela’s parents are throwing a party at their house and have hired a local teen named Kelvin to watch Bela. Though Mommy wanted to cancel because Bela fell down the slide, Daddo insists that they should keep the schedule and celebrate Bela’s clean bill of health. Bela enjoys the parties because she is good at dancing and likes to dance for the adults there as well as to spend time with Kelvin, whom she thinks of as a friend. Other guests at the party include their neighbors Amanda and Dan, who never stay late, because they have a new baby, and Daddo’s friend Mark.

Kelvin arrives, and Mommy tells him about Bela’s fall. During the conversation, Bela worries that they will see Other Mommy in the bathroom. She acts strangely, but Kelvin and Mommy brush it off as excitement about the party. While she gets dressed, Kelvin asks her if they have squirrels because he hears a noise on the roof.

She tells Kelvin that carnations bring people back to life, misunderstanding what Other Mommy said about “reincarnation.” When they go downstairs, Kelvin repeats this fact to Daddo, who laughs and says Bela must mean reincarnation, not carnations.

Daddo introduces Bela to a woman named Lois Anthony, who tells Bela that she may have a special ability to sense ghosts. She touches Bela’s shoulder but seems disappointed, like she didn’t feel what she expected to. Bela wanders around the party and talks to adults, including her parents’ drunken friend Marsha. She encounters Lois again, who asks if she can try to feel Bela’s abilities one more time. She asks Bela if she is seeing any ghosts, and Bela tells her no, as she does not think of Other Mommy as a ghost.

Kelvin and Bela dance, and one of the men at the party starts telling a ghost story from his childhood. Bela is unsettled by the story and by Lois’s stare from across the room. Before he finishes the story, Marsha begins screaming, saying she saw a monster across the room that was tall, hairy, and dark blue.

In the ensuing shock, Bela corrects her and tells Marsha that it wasn’t a monster—it was Other Mommy.

Chapter 12 Summary

In Bela’s room, Daddo sits on her bed, thinking she is asleep. He says that he is stoned and muses in a long, meandering monologue about the joys and pains of adulthood. He talks about a friend from childhood named Quinn Doyle who died in a car wreck and all the things he missed out on because he never grew up.

He asks Bela if she’s asleep and if she really saw what Marsha saw. Bela doesn’t answer, so he goes to the closet and says that anything in it should leave, because they are happy and don’t need ghosts in the house. Bela is frightened that he will make Other Mommy angry, but she stays still. The closet doors creak open, and Daddo asks if Kelvin or Ursula is there. He finally decides that it’s a loose hinge and gets a tool kit, fixing the door.

He tells Bela that fear is a vital part of being alive and that this experience is one of the things Quinn Doyle is missing out on. Bela sits up and asks him if reincarnation is bad. He tells her no, that it’s a beautiful thing. She asks him where the person in the body would go if someone came into their heart, and he tells her she is misunderstanding how it works. The doors creak again and, breathing hard, he stands up and puts a chair in front of them. He tells Bela he will sleep in her bed tonight.

After Daddo falls asleep, Bela lies awake, frightened. She worries that Other Mommy isn’t her friend and that she will keep coming closer.

Chapter 13 Summary

The next morning, Daddo is still asleep, and Bela makes her own breakfast. Her mother returns, still in the clothes from the party. She asks Bela to tell her more about Other Mommy and says that Marsha was so scared that she slept at her brother’s house.

Bela tells her that Other Mommy has eyes that are sometimes on the side of her face and that she can change sizes. She also slithers on her belly across the floor. Mommy is disturbed but calls the conversation “creative.” She asks if Other Mommy has ever talked to her, but they are interrupted by Daddo, who is surprised that Mommy didn’t sleep at home. She tells him she went to Marsha’s house, but Bela knows that she is lying.

Bela reminds them that they promised to take her to the zoo, and they agree to go. She asks if she can get a stuffed vulture. Mommy says it is a weird animal to choose, but Bela thinks that she likes them because they only eat things that are already dead.

Chapter 14 Summary

The family walks around the zoo, visiting the reptile house. Bela thinks about how her former teacher, Mr. Jeffery, told their class that some places have special meaning to the people who spend time there. Bela thinks the zoo has special meaning for her parents and that they always tell her to go ahead and explore while they lag behind, talking. They begin to argue about Mommy staying out late and about Bela’s imagination, so Bela interrupts and tells them she wants to see the butterfly house. They tell her to wait because the butterfly house is at the end of the walk, but they pause their fighting long enough to go see the penguins.

In the zoo, they run into Lois, who tells them she loves to walk there to clear her head. Lois asks them to stop by her group, which meets on Fridays to discuss the supernatural. Daddo is interested, but Mommy is dismissive.

When they reach the butterfly house, the parents send Bela in ahead and resume their argument. Bela starts to wander, looking at the butterflies, but then spots something that looks like a blue eye watching her from under a leaf. She imagines Other Mommy lying in wait for her and panics, running and screaming for her parents. They find her and take her out of the house. Daddo sees that she is scared and is sympathetic, but Mommy says it is due to people like Lois and that the nonsense has to stop now.

Chapter 15 Summary

At home, Mommy empties out Bela’s closet and opens the windows. She tells her that there is nothing there and suggests that she sleep with the door open for a while. She makes Bela lie down to take a nap. Reluctant at first, Bela eventually drifts off to sleep, thinking that her closet looks small and empty without anyone watching her.

Chapter 16 Summary

Bela awakens in her room. It is dark outside, and Mommy is sitting on her bed, thinking aloud. She says that she is cheating on Daddo, and she feels guilty for doing it because he is such a good man. She explains that she has her own hopes and dreams that don’t include being a mother and that she is also angry because Bela is having these weird imaginative terrors about Other Mommy right when she wants to be focusing on herself the most. She says that parenthood should not be a prison sentence.

Bela worries that Mommy is drunk, and she hears creaking coming down the hall. She is afraid Daddo will hear and wonders if she should say something. Mommy continues talking and says that she has been thinking about reincarnation. She wonders if she could come back as a better mother in a new body. She asks Bela if Bela can help give her life.

Bela’s mother stands at the door and asks Bela whom she is speaking to, and Bela realizes that Other Mommy is sitting on her bed, pretending to be her mother and impersonating her voice. Mommy turns on the light and sees Other Mommy and begins to scream. She snatches Bela up and runs out into the yard, shouting that Daddo isn’t home.

Outside, Mommy shakes and asks Bela if that was Other Mommy. Bela says yes.

Chapter 17 Summary

Bela and Mommy wait at Dan and Amanda’s house. Daddo is on his way but plans to stop at their home first. Bela asks them to stop him from going in the house, and she worries that he will also see Other Mommy. Dan and Amanda are very uncomfortable with what is happening but try to be polite.

When Daddo arrives, he and Mommy talk in the hall. Dan and Amanda put on Tangled for Bela to watch, but she overhears snippets of the conversation. Daddo returns and asks her if anyone has tried to hurt her, like a grownup from school, but she denies it. Daddo decides to call the police and say there was an intruder in their home. Mommy says they will stay the night here and asks Dan to put on their alarm system. He says that he will and that she has them scared out of their minds.

Chapter 18 Summary

Everyone sleeps in the living room, waiting for Daddo to return from the police station. Bela hears a noise in the hall and worries that it is Other Mommy. Dan also wakes up and hears it, asking his wife if she heard any noises. She tells him that she snores, but he seems doubtful.

Daddo texts that he is home, and Dan goes to let him in, turning on all the lights before he does.

Chapter 19 Summary

Amanda and Dan return to their bedroom, and Daddo sits with Bela on the couch. He asks her more about Other Mommy, and Bela tells him she thinks that Other Mommy has been tricking her. She pretended to be her friend but really wants to “carnation” her. She asks Daddo if he thinks Other Mommy is a ghost, and he says he doesn’t know. He talks to her about different kinds of emotions and different kinds of fear, trying to comfort her by saying that he isn’t afraid.

They are interrupted when Dan comes downstairs and asks where Ursula is. Daddo explains that she is on the porch and Dan says he just saw her in their bedroom. He and Amanda ask them to leave, saying that the entire situation has them rattled. Daddo is understanding, but Mommy is furious, calling them “selfish” and “dicks.” She calls her mother and says that they will go stay with her.

In the car, they start to drive away, and a deer leaps into the street, startling them. After the scare, they all laugh, relaxing the tension, and start to drive again. However, another deer appears, and they all fall silent.

Chapters 11-19 Analysis

This section constitutes the rising action as Bela’s parents learn of the reality of Other Mommy and begin to realize the danger their daughter faces. The external conflict also increases the pressure on Russ and Ursula’s already fraught marriage, exposing how fragile their relationship really is. When Marsha sees Other Mommy at the party, Russ and Ursula can dismiss her fears as hysteria fueled by alcohol. However, they are both unsettled enough that they start to question Bela about what Marsha saw. Once Ursula sees the monster, their reaction changes, and they start to understand that the threat to their family is real. When Bela tells her mother that she saw Other Mommy at the park, she says, “It’s following you then. My God, it’s following you” (114). Ursula’s evident fear in this moment is an early lesson for Bela in Coming to Terms with the Fallibility of Adults. As a young child, Bela looks to her parents for protection, but Ursula is even more afraid than Bela is, and Bela realizes in this moment that her parents may not be able to protect her.

As tensions rise in Russ and Ursula’s relationship, Malerman explores the theme of The Resurfacing of Hidden Trauma. At the beginning of the novel, Ursula and Russ behave as if all is well even when Ursula is seldom home, and Russ doesn’t know where she’s sleeping after the party. Russ tries to bluster his way through his initial fear of the supernatural by telling Bela’s closet, “If there are such things as ghosts, go somewhere else and be one there. This house doesn’t want you. We’re happy here” (72-73). However, this is a lie. No one in the house is happy. Russ and Ursula hide their unhappiness from Bela, but Bela can sense it. The malevolent being that emerges from her closet is an embodiment of her sense that something unspoken is very wrong in her family. Bela’s own unhappiness becomes hidden as well, as she has no one with whom she can talk about it. Other Mommy uses Bela’s hidden unhappiness to get close to her in the guise of friendship.

Bela longs for earlier days when her parents didn’t fight and thinks, “If there was a sound that was the opposite of Other Mommy’s voice, it would be laughter” (51). One of the reasons she is reluctant to confess that Other Mommy exists is because she wants her parents to be happy and does not want to cause them distress. When they walk through the zoo, she wonders, “Is our habitat, our house, a safe place for Mommy and Daddo?” (90). Significantly, she does not worry about whether it is a safe place for her even though she is the one in danger. When Ursula finally sees Other Mommy, it is at a moment when the entity is acting directly as an embodiment of The Resurfacing of Hidden Trauma, literally voicing all of Ursula’s secret, unspoken regrets about motherhood, saying “now I have to be focused on my family at the exact moment I only want to focus on myself. Is that selfish, Bela? It might be” (102). She posits reincarnation as a way that Bela can make her happy. Though Bela realizes it is Other Mommy speaking, she wonders if what the entity is expressing is how her mother really feels about her. Given Ursula’s reaction to hearing the entity speak in her voice, it is strongly implied that she heard what it was saying and was horrified at being exposed in this way.

Though the family initially takes shelter with Amanda and Dan, they are asked to leave and find somewhere else to go after Dan thinks he sees Ursula’s doppelganger. Ursula is angry at the rejection, but Amanda defends their decision, saying, “You come over here with an absolutely insane story of an intruder in your house, you talk like it’s a demon, and you’re up all night all over the house!” (127). Their rejection indicates that Amanda and Dan are afraid of whatever is in Bela’s house also infecting their house and possibly threatening their baby. Bela imagines “Other Mommy sitting on the edge of their bed, telling them what they don’t know about each other” (109). On some level, she understands that Other Mommy thrives on the pre-existing domestic distress in her household and exploits it. This moment also foreshadows the isolation that Other Mommy brings to Bela and her family. Dan and Amanda will not be the last people to refuse to help or to be unable to help them. Ultimately, their household must face the problem together as a family, without relying on help from others.

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