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Reverend Gruffydd delivers a sermon to an angry crowd of people. Earlier in the day, “a little girl had been savaged on the mountain” (187). The girl is now dead and the crowd of 200 or 300 is searching for the killer. The crowd visits the pubs and the parts of the village where the poorest people live. Men are rounded up and questioned. Eventually, they reach Idris Atkinson. Reverend Gruffydd catches Atkinson in a lie about his whereabouts. Bloodied clothes are found around and in his house. His clothes are removed and “deep scratches” (192) are revealed on his chest. Reverend Gruffydd calls forward Cynlais Pritchard, the father of the murdered girl. The priest asks the crowd whether they should hand Atkinson over to the police or execute him themselves. Cynlais and the crowd demand vigilante justice. Cynlais and his sons take Atkinson away into the night while Reverend Gruffydd leads the crowd in prayer. As the men return to their homes, Huw sees a fire burning on the dark side of the mountain. When a police officer visits the next day, no one answers his questions, so he leaves. Huw watches the funeral preparations. He sees the people follow the “little white coffin” (195). After the funeral, the wake is held in the Pritchard house. Reverend Gruffydd comforts the grieving family.
After the funeral, Huw returns home. His brothers are working to grow the union. They host a meeting in a local pub and get into an argument with Isaac Wynn. Later, Huw is introduced to a man named Dai Bando, a boxer who is said to have fought “more than a thousand fights” (200). Dai has agreed to give Huw lessons “in the art of boxing” (201). Each morning, he is roused before sunrise and made to climb up the mountain for his daily boxing lesson. Dai and his friend Cynfartha lead a small group of boys through the exercises and practice bouts. Dai encourages Huw to “fight all the time” (204) as this is the best way to learn. Huw runs home down the mountain and then goes to school.
Huw grows more accustomed to his new school. He finds a place where he can fight the boys who broke his pencil box. He fights Mervyn Phillips on the playground, and, just as he knocks the other boy to the ground, Mr. Jonas arrives. Huw goes into the classroom with his friend Mat Powell and waits for the teacher. In front of the other students, Mr. Jonas beats Huw and Mervyn with a cane. Huw sits through a geography lesson and then struggles to move. Shani Hughes, a girl in Huw’s class, offers to bring him a glass of water. They talk about their collections of bird eggs and agree to meet after school. Later, Mervyn Phillips makes amends with Huw. He introduces Huw to his sister, Ceinwen. Mervyn and Huw shake hands then Ceinwen offers to kiss Huw. Then, he meets Shani and agrees to bring her a nightingale egg the following day. He returns home and inspects his wounds. Ianto is shocked by the severity of Huw’s wounds. Huw runs out the house before anyone else can see. He falls asleep on the side of the mountain and dreams about the events of the day. He wakes up in the night and wants to talk to Reverend Gruffydd, who is hosting a “big meeting” (215) for the people of the village. Huw listens to the priest deliver an impassioned sermon. Bronwen spots Huw, chiding him for being away. She takes him home and he falls asleep in his bed.
At his boxing lesson the next day, Dai spots the wounds on Huw’s back. He tells his teacher about Mr. Jonas. Dai and Cynfartha discuss whether they should perhaps meet Mr. Jonas. At home, Gwilym demands to see the wounds. Huw confesses to fighting in the playground. Gwilym is proud of his son and agrees to take Huw to watch Wales play Ireland in a rugby match. Huw goes to school with his nightingale egg for Shani. The other students act differently toward him. During a lesson, Mr. Jonas is summoned to Mr. Motshill’s office. While he is away, Ceinwen Phillips apologizes for her involvement in breaking Huw’s stationary. She gifts him an ivory ruler and asks for a nightingale’s egg in return. Huw agrees. Outside the classroom, people shout. Dai, Cynfartha, and a group of teachers chase Mr. Jonas into the classroom. Dai beats Mr. Jonas with a belt while Cynfartha holds back the other teachers. When they are finished, Dai and Cynfartha sling Mr. Jonas into the coal locker. Dai rolls a cigarette while Mr. Motshill threatens to call the police. Dai ignores the threat and agrees with Cynfartha to go for “a good pint” (222) in the local pub. When they are gone, Mr. Jonas is pulled out of the coal locker.
After school, Huw finds a group of men in the street. Ellis explains that they are on strike. Huw passes the time by carefully cleaning Owen’s engine. When Gwilym returns home, he is sad. Ianto returns shortly after, explaining that everyone is “in pain” (225). The men are on strike and have no idea when it will end, so the family must begin cutting costs. Over the coming months, the striking men meet every day. The working men want higher wages but the owners of the mine refuse their demands. Huw continues to attend school. Mr. Jonas says nothing about the incident with Dai. Huw notices his classmates such as Shani growing thin and pale. Huw offers to share his lunch with her. When he tells his mother what happened, the next day his lunch box is packed full of food to share with Shani. Eventually, however, she stops attending school as her family moves north to find work.
As more months pass, the lack of money shows around the village. The families with savings help to feed the families without. Reverend Gruffydd fetches food from the town and shares as much as he can, but even he grows thin. For fun, he organizes a choir to sing hymns. With the strike entering the fifth month, children begin to die of malnutrition. People scavenge what wood or coal they can to heat their homes in winter. One day, Gwilym receives a letter from the owners announcing that they have “promised a minimum wage” (229). The small concession is good news for the family. Gwilym attends a meeting with the owners. The strike ends and the people celebrate. Gwilym prays to God in thanks.
Huw walks through the snowy mountains to get to school. Mr. Motshill speaks to Huw about his schoolwork and Huw asks to be transferred out of Mr. Jonas’s class. In the classroom, Mr. Jonas demands to speak to Huw in private and drags him out of the room by his ear. The physicality infuriates Huw, and, in the hallway, he punches the teacher. The fight is interrupted by Mr. Motshill, who suspends Huw for the rest of the week. Huw walks home, worried about how he will explain himself to his mother. Instead, he goes to Reverend Gruffydd. He is shocked to find Angharad with the priest. She is declaring her love for him, but he is reluctant to give in to her, as such a relationship “still seems wrong” (237). Huw sneaks away and finds Bronwen instead. She tells him to confess what he has done to his mother. He is surprised by his mother’s lack of anger. Rather than punish him, she tells him to take a set of shelves to Reverend Gruffydd. Huw explains himself to the priest, who tells him to be ashamed to lose his “precious temper” (240) in such a way. Gwilym is less angry. He is invested in the possibility of Huw passing the scholarship exams for university. During his suspension, Huw performs chores around the house. Just as Reverend Gruffydd and Huw are about to start work on a set of furniture, the priest is called to attend to Mr. Evans, who has had an accident in the mine. Mr. Evans dies, and the village sings a hymn to pay their respects.
The funeral is well-attended. Angharad walks beside Iestyn Evans. After, Huw talks to Bronwen about Angharad having to choose between Iestyn and the 40-year-old Reverend Gruffydd. Huw is surprised by how little the priest earns. Now that Iestyn has inherited his father’s money, Bronwen believes he is the more intelligent choice for Angharad. When Huw returns to school, Ceinwen asks him to take her “to hear the nightingales one night” (244). Huw promises to do so. He is transferred from Mr. Jonas’s class to Mr. Tyser’s class. He is so pleased that he resolves to work hard to thank Mr. Motshill.
Huw thinks about how his “poor little house” (246) will eventually fall apart and be buried under the slag heap that builds up beside the village. Returning to his childhood, he writes about the day he first went to the cloth mill with his father. He is measured for his first proper suit in time for the weddings, first that of Ceridwen and Blethyn, then of Angharad and Iestyn. Now that Iestyn has returned from London, Iestyn and Angharad seem set to marry. While Ceridwen and Blethyn seem to Huw to be very much in love, he senses something different about Angharad’s disposition toward the wealthy Iestyn. An announcement in the newspaper (sent from London by Owen) proclaims the marriage between Iestyn and Angharad, though nothing has been officially arranged. Gwilym is angry because such an announcement should “be read in Chapel properly” (251) before any newspaper is involved. Angharad is equally annoyed that Iestyn has announced their engagement without consulting her. She demands two days to think, which infuriates Iestyn. Huw tells him to keep the incident quiet. The next day, Huw is working with Reverend Gruffydd on the furniture when Angharad comes to speak to the priest. Huw sees Angharad run away from the house. When Reverend Gruffydd returns to their work, Huw says nothing.
The following Sunday, Reverend Gruffydd reads out the announcement engagement for Angharad and Iestyn in the chapel. As the couple makes arrangements for the marriage, however, they soon disagree. When Iestyn announces a plan to marry suddenly in London, Angharad cries to her mother. Huw is sent away, so he speaks to Bronwen. As they eat, Huw asks Bronwen a question about Nan Mardy. He is frustrated that he does not understand people’s jokes about Nan Mardy needing to “see a shirt tail” (257). Bronwen laughs, which infuriates Huw. He feels as though he is being treated like a child. Bronwen agrees to think about telling him the meaning of the joke. Thankful, Huw kisses her “quietly upon the mouth” (258) and runs away. The next day, Reverend Gruffydd comes to Huw and speaks obliquely about the way that babies are made. Gradually, the priest attempts to explain the physical mechanics of sex and “the business of birth” (264). When Huw invites the priest to dine with the family that night, Reverend Gruffydd declines. Sometime later, Iestyn takes Angharad to London to be married. Gwilym and Beth stay in the village, hurt that the wedding did not take place in the chapel. Angharad sends postcards from her honeymoon in Europe.
Huw will attend the wedding of Ceridwen and Blethyn in his new suit. Davy will marry Wyn on the same day. Huw describes the fitting of the suit with the argumentative tailors. As the family prepares for the weddings, Owen and Gwilym Jr. return. The family celebrates and Bronwen and Huw are left behind to finish the preparations in the chapel. They tell the good news to Reverend Gruffydd, who seems dejected. After he leaves, Bronwen describes her sympathy for the priest who seems “empty” (271) after turning down Angharad’s advances. As they talk, Bronwen and Huw both begin to blush. Huw is puzzled by their interaction but decides that he has now become “a Man” (272). His thoughts are interrupted when Ianto presses him into service cleaning in the kitchen. Later, the family sits down to dinner. Owen announces his plan to return home to work. He and Gwilym Jr. have been sacked for trying to start a union for the men building the subway system in London. Conversation shifts to the local choir and the chapel. Since their father Gwilym does not want to talk about the mine or the union, the family begins to sing. Soon, the rest of the street has joined them. During the festivities, Huw can feel Bronwen looking at him. He asks her about the strangeness between them recently and she agrees to reveal everything the next day.
The next morning, the preparations for the wedding begin. Huw dresses in his new suit for the first time. He feels “elegant” (281). His parents are equally impressed. Huw watches a rugby game between the local team and a team from another valley. Davy is a star player for the Morgans’ local side. As his side takes the lead, Ceinwen Philips spots him. Huw worries that his brothers will see him talk to a girl. When he is reluctant to fetch her a glass of water, she cries. People around take notice, including Huw’s father. He criticizes his son for being so impolite. Huw furiously leads Ceinwen away to get a drink. She delights in making him so angry. Huw takes her back to the family house, where he is shocked by how much Ceinwen eats when his mother offers her food. To Huw’s annoyance, his mother invites her to the weddings. By the time they return to the match, the game is over. The wedding ceremonies take place. When the couples step out of the chapel, the crowds throw flowers at them. As the celebrations continue, Huw tries to avoid Ceinwen. When she kisses him, she asks whether they will be “sweethearts” (293). Huw is reluctant to answer. She assures him that she will not stop pursuing him. At the end of the night, the guests begin to leave. Ceinwen comes to Huw again and Huw wants to kiss her, but he rudely rejects her. She kisses him forcefully then marches away into the night. Huw finishes the chapter by describing his dislike of “gossips” (295).
After learning that Huw has been fighting in school, his father Gwilym is not angry. Instead, he insists that his son should learn how to stand up for himself. In this way, Huw’s physical education mirrors his intellectual education. Going to a new school is a fine way to continue his intellectual education, but it means nothing if he cannot handle himself in a physical sense. Gwilym takes pride in everything he does and, if his son is to be forced into a fight, he believes that his son should be able to fight properly. The lessons with Dai Bando and Cynfartha should not be considered separate from Huw’s schoolwork. Instead, they are a part of a holistic whole, Gwilym’s attempt to educate his son in the ways of the world rather than just in an academic manner. Huw learns these lessons from his father. When the time comes to repair the pencil box, for example, he takes great care over the work. Though he has little woodworking experience, he is determined to mend the box properly. Whether he is studying in school, taking boxing lessons with Dai, or fixing a pencil box which was broken by bullies, Huw follows in his father’s footsteps and takes great care in his work.
The theme of Ill-Fated Love is developed as Reverend Gruffydd is forced to make a decision regarding Angharad. He has fallen in love with her, and she has fallen in love with him, even though he is many years older than her, and she is being courted by Iestyn Evans. The priest is caught in a difficult position, attempting to balance his responsibilities to Angharad, to his congregation, and to his own self. He eventually takes ownership of the situation and tells Angharad that they cannot be together. She is distraught and she marries Iestyn, a move which will make her miserable in years to come. For Reverend Gruffydd, the decision is an act of self-denial. He denies himself happiness out of a sense of duty to others. He is a priest, and this act of self-denial is an expression of asceticism. He abstains from a relationship which would make him happy, and which would make Angharad happy because he does not believe that such a relationship would be good for either her or the community.
The priest’s doomed relationship to Angharad provides a lens through which to understand Huw’s struggle to define his feelings for Bronwen. He grows up in a household where she is almost like a second mother or a big sister to him. She scolds him when he acts badly and praises him when he succeeds, while enjoying a warm and convivial relationship with the boy she views as being mature beyond his years. During the double wedding, this affection reaches an impasse as they both recognize that there is something more than just familial love between them. Like the priest, he has difficulty deciding what kind of relationship he has a duty to: familial or romantic. Their responses to this are very different but, since Huw is the narrator, the audience is only able to glimpse his response. Huw decides to bury his affection for Bronwen and deny that these feelings exist, echoing the self-denial of his mentor, Reverend Gruffydd. Even after the death of Ivor, even after Huw moves in with Bronwen, even after they have lived together for many years, he refuses to acknowledge the sincerity of his affection for Bronwen. From a young age, he opts for self-denial rather than emotional honesty, even with himself, which contributes to some of the defining qualities of Ill-Fated Love.