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When Sherlock returns to the manor, his absence has been detected and will be punished. It doesn’t matter that the letter from Winchcombe will alleviate fears of a plague outbreak. In the future, the boy will not be allowed to leave the house unless accompanied by Crowe. The one saving grace is that Sherlock will be given free access to his uncle’s library.
Later that day, he writes a letter to Mycroft, telling him about the mysterious bee-related deaths and the involvement of Baron Maupertuis. He leaves the sealed letter in the hall, assuming a maid will post it. Belatedly, he realizes that Mrs. Eglantine has been lurking around and may have opened the letter to see what it contained. That same evening, Sherlock finds a note addressed to him. It is an invitation from Virginia to meet him at a fair being held on the castle grounds the following morning at nine o’clock.
The next day, Sherlock heads to the fair on his bicycle. As he searches for Virginia, he gets pulled into a boxing match when someone shoves him into the ring with the current champion. Though he tries to defend himself and breaks his opponent’s nose in the process, Sherlock gets knocked out: “Pain filled Sherlock’s world, red and raw. Everything seemed so far away. He was falling, but he didn’t feel the impact as he hit the ground. Darkness claimed him, and he went willingly” (171).
Sherlock wakes up hours later in a plush bedroom. Disoriented, he thinks himself to be at Holmes Manor but soon learns he is being held prisoner at the estate of Baron Maupertuis. Looking out the window, he sees the odd sight of stacked wooden boxes. He observes, “The boxes were spaced apart in a regular grid. A quick multiplication in Sherlock’s mind told him that he was staring at something like five hundred boxes” (175). He realizes that these are the hives of the deadly bees that Professor Winchcombe told him about.
Two men enter his chamber. They wear black velvet livery with face masks to match and compel the boy to go with them. He is led into a darkened chamber and seated at the end of a massive table. Sherlock can’t see the person at the other end, but the man begins to interrogate him about his activities at the warehouse. When he doesn’t answer immediately, he is whipped: “Something came flashing out of the darkness, thin and black and uncurling like a striking snake. It caught his right cheek before withdrawing into the dark” (179). After repeated strikes with the whip, Sherlock confesses that he knows about the men killed by bee stings. He also reveals all the other people who know about the warehouse business. His interrogator concludes that there are too many to silence, so the operation must be speeded up. The baron then orders Sherlock to be killed.
As the boy is being led out of the room, Matty comes to his rescue, striking one of the guards with a metal club that he lifted from a suit of armor. The two boys flee, but the baron’s guards chase them from one end of the estate to the other until they manage to steal two horses. When escape through the gates is cut off, they ride into the house and exit through an unguarded back entrance.
The boys go directly to Crowe’s cottage, where he patches up Sherlock’s wounds and listens to the tale of what happened at the baron’s estate. Crowe advises against going to the police because the story is so incredible that no one would believe it. Instead, the tutor wants to get more information from the locals who live near the baron’s property. He sets out with Sherlock, Matty, and Virginia. At a tavern, they stop for food, where Crowe begins to chat with the locals, affecting a working-class British accent. While the teens wait outside for him, Virginia points out that she never sent the invitation to Sherlock, and he admits that he was lured into a trap. She also explains that her father was a tracker in the United States, hunting down criminals who escaped justice.
Once Crowe returns, he reports that Maupertuis and his retinue decamped earlier in the day. They took all the hive boxes with them. Crowe says that he will use some of his contacts in the government to track the baron and find out where he is going next. The tutor then sends Sherlock home to await the news. The next morning, Crowe arrives at Holmes Manor and announces a field trip to London. Virginia and Matty will be going along. Crowe has received word from his spies that the baron is heading to the city.
The travelers arrive at Waterloo Station and check into the Sarbonnier Hotel. Crowe buys Matty new clothes and gets his hair cut to make him look presentable. The tutor receives word from one of his contacts that the baron and his party can be found in Rotherhithe, where they intend to travel by water. He says, “It’s a few miles downriver—an unsavory location where sailors take their entertainment between voyages and goods are stored before being loaded onto ships. Not a place where you want to be after dark” (214).
Crowe wants Sherlock to get a closer look at the baron’s cargo to see if it includes the beehives from Farnham. He intends to take the boys to Rotherhithe but orders Virginia to stay at the hotel. The trio hires a boat downriver to their destination. Once near the warehouse where the baron’s cargo is stored, Crowe stations the boys on street corners near taverns. He tells them to listen to any conversations they overhear that might offer useful information. Crowe then goes alone to investigate the warehouse. Sherlock notices four men staggering out of a tavern. Their leader says, “You head off to Ripon, Snagger goes to Colchester, the lad Nicholson here gets an easy ride to Woolwich, an’ I get to go back to Aldershot” (223). Unfortunately, the boy makes eye contact with one of the men, who instantly recognizes him. Sherlock barely escapes the men, and a frantic chase ensues.
This segment details another aspect of Becoming Holmes. The young detective learns that there are consequences for pursuing desperate criminals because he has inadvertently placed his own life in danger. The man who attempted to kill him on the boat in the preceding segment was only a prelude to the kind of danger that Sherlock has brought down upon himself. The teen is still innocent and inexperienced and doesn’t suspect the ploys that an enemy might use to trap him. As an adult, he will become adept at dodging these snares, but not so in Death Cloud. When he receives a note purportedly from Virginia, it never occurs to him that he might be walking into an ambush. He is then abducted to the baron’s estate, where he is rather painfully interrogated. In a parallel to the preceding segment, Sherlock is on the brink of being killed when Matty arrives to rescue him, thus emphasizing once more The Value of Allies. However, the focus quickly reverts to the ways in which Sherlock is exhibiting qualities that will become part of his adult persona. When the boys are trapped on the grounds of the estate with no way out, Sherlock grasps at another improbable solution by riding a horse through the mansion and finding a back exit that has been left unguarded.
After returning to consult with his mentor, he is about to receive another lesson in Becoming Holmes. When Crowe wants to obtain information about the baron from the locals at a tavern, he adopts their vernacular to put them at ease.
‘And how did you get them to answer your questions?’ Matty added. ‘You’re a stranger around here, and people don’t usually open up to strangers.’ ‘Best thing to do is not be a stranger then,’ he replied. ‘If you just sit there for a while, makin’ conversation with the barman, you become part of the furniture. Then you join in with the conversation’ (199).
The adult Holmes will adopt this same ploy on multiple occasions. He becomes an expert in disguise and can blend into any environment like a chameleon. When he makes himself as inconspicuous as possible, he can glean whatever information he needs.
The same lesson is amplified after Sherlock, Matty, Crowe, and Virginia arrive in London. When Crowe wants Matty and Sherlock to go to Rotherhithe to gather information about the baron and his travel plans, the tutor advises the boys to roll in the dirt. They need to look like the “street toughs” who frequent this dangerous part of town. Further, he advises Sherlock on some basic spy tactics: “Sherlock, you stay here. Hunker down on the ground an’ play with somethin’—some stones if you can find ‘em. Remember—don’t make eye contact, but watch what’s goin’ on out of the corner of your eye” (220).
As an adult, Holmes will use the same tactic, not seeming to observe anything at all while keeping a close eye on everything that moves in his vicinity. He uses the method of disguise quite effectively in the first Holmes story, “A Scandal in Bohemia,” but there are many similar examples in the canon.
Because Sherlock is still an amateur spy, he almost immediately forgets Crowe’s advice. When he overhears a conversation among the baron’s henchmen, he glances up and makes eye contact. Unfortunately, this mistake will cost him dearly:
As he was talking, he passed close to Sherlock. His foot caught the cobblestone, kicking it across the alley. Unwittingly, Sherlock glanced up and met the man’s gaze. It was Denny, the man whom Sherlock had followed back to the warehouse in Farnham (223-24).
A deadly chase ensues, with an innocent bystander getting knifed in the process. Although the game is now afoot, it hardly seems like a game anymore to the fledgling detective: “Denny smiled at Sherlock as Bill fell forward onto the cobbled surface of the road. ‘With you,’ he promised, ‘it won’t be so quick’” (227).