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Ramy, Victoire, Letty, and Robin are stressed out as they prepare for end-of-year exams. Tensions between Letty and Victoire and Letty and Ramy add to the strain. Robin even hallucinates seeing Anthony Ribben one day in town.
Robin and Ramy are studying for exams when they come across a brilliant match-pair made by Eveline (Evie) Brooke. Evie was a Babel student who studied in the same year as Sterling Jones, Anthony, and Griffin. Evie was such an important student that Professor Playfair has a desk in his classroom with her books and name on it, and no one is allowed to sit at it. Despite her achievements, she disappears from the records after 1833.
All four of the cohort members pass their exams. In the moment when they all receive the good news and celebrate with each other, Robin wishes he could preserve this “golden afternoon” (236) in something better and warmer than silver. Doing so isn’t possible, though.
Friendships within the cohort unravel even more. Letty convinces Ramy, Robin, and Victoire to go to an Oxford ball despite Victoire’s objection that they will be unwelcome because of prejudice. At the ball, Ramy refuses to dance with Letty because he likely has feelings for Robin and because he doesn’t want to upset the racists by dancing with a white woman. Drunken gentlemen scholars surround Letty and Victoire and demand that the two young women show them their breasts so they can compare their color. Robin distracts the main offender by telling him it would be a shame to let a Chinese person (Robin echoes the slur used by the gentleman scholar) interrupt his fun. The men lose interest, and Robin catches up with the young women and Ramy, who’ve escaped by then.
Ramy blames Letty for the entire episode. Victoire warned her that something like this could happen. Letty says she was attacked as well, so the attack wasn’t really about race. Something about her argument bothers Robin. The cohort finds another party. Robin spends part of the night comforting Letty, who is upset that Ramy doesn’t love her. Robin realizes Letty is the kind of “girl who was used to, and had come to always expect, special attention” (249). He comforts her but feels himself disappearing, “fading into the background of a painting depicting a story that must be as old as history” (249). On the way home, they walk through the Oxford graveyard, where they discover the gravestone of Evie Brooke.
Robin discovers Ramy and Victoire trapped in wards after stealing silver from Babel. He assumes correctly that they are stealing for Hermes. He helps them escape, but he gets trapped by the sticky wards. He forces them to leave so it will look like he was acting alone. Babel’s security detains Robin, but Lovell sweeps the detention under the rug when the officer contacts him first.
Lovell gets Robin to admit Griffin got him involved in Hermes. Lovell admits that Griffin was a failed project. He hands Robin a silver bar inscribed with the Chinese-English match-pair “fire+violence+cruelty+turbulence” in Chinese translated to the English “burst.” The mismatch in intensity between the Chinese and English words gives the bar the potential to explode. Griffin killed Evie Brooke wielding this bar.
Robin agrees to give him information about Hermes and tells him the location of the safehouse Griffin told him about. Lovell believes there is still hope for Robin because he is “less corrupted by [his] heritage” than Griffin (268). Lovell says Robin can pass as white (he uses a slur to describe Robin here). He gives Robin two options: stay at Babel if he is willing to be useful, or return to Canton. Robin chooses Babel and accepts the bar when Lovell insists that he keep it as a reminder.
Kuang uses a third-person perspective from Ramy’s point of view for this chapter. Ramy came from a family that started out wealthy but fell in status because Great Britain meddled in land ownership and taxation in India. Ramy’s father supported the family by working as a footman in Calcutta (modern-day Kolkata), West Bengal, India. Horace Wilson, his boss, was the secretary of an Eastern languages organization. Wilson knew that Ramy’s father was fluent in those languages and that Ramy himself was a quick learner.
Ramy’s father taught him many necessary things to survive as an Indian among the English—how to lie to flatter Wilson and his condescending guests, how to mask his emotions when this treatment pushed him to the brink, and how “seizing control of the story” (272) whites wanted to tell about him would give him some measure of control. Ramy was to keep his faith in secret but always maintain his identity.
When Wilson took Ramy to England to study languages, Ramy had to put these lessons to use. By the time admission to Babel came, Ramy “could have written a thesis on white pride, on white curiosity. He knew how to make of himself an object of fascination while neutralizing himself as a threat” (473). He felt hollow inside until Anthony Ribben recruited him into the Hermes Society in his third year.
Robin, Ramy, Victoire, and Letty receive sudden notice that they will go to Canton on a mission to open trade in China. Such trips usually don’t happen until one’s fourth year at Babel. Ramy and Victoire are angry that Robin didn’t tell them he was in Hermes and that he told Lovell about the safe house. Lovell makes overtures to Robin about the need for a new start between them. During the journey to Canton, Letty notices the tension among Ramy, Victoire, and Robin; the cohort is falling apart because of their secrets. Robin is awake at the end of the six-week trip and gets to see dawn in Canton for the first time in many years.
After arriving, the expedition meets with Mr. Baylis, liaison with the Jardine, Matheson & Co., the company managing trade in the port of Canton. Mr. Baylis uses racist slurs for Chinese officials and people. He complains that Imperial Commissioner Lin Zexu is so scrupulous that he disrupts Great Britain’s importation of Indian opium into China. This is a problem because opium is the only thing China wants from Great Britain. There is a trade imbalance that threatens Great Britain’s hold on silver and the region. Robin grows increasingly angry as Baylis insults China, Chinese food, and Chinese governance.
Baylis and the people around him claim opium is harmless. Baylis waves off Robin’s and Ramy’s objections about the immorality of the opium trade by arguing that “the point is free trade between nations” and that “there should be no restrictions between those who have goods and those who want to purchase them. That’s justice” (298-99). Robin and Ramy leave the residence to find Robin’s old home. It is gone and has been replaced with an opium den. Over Ramy’s objections, Robin enters the den to get high.
The next day, Robin serves as the interpreter for negotiations between Baylis and Commissioner Lin. Robin interprets the words accurately but minimizes the contempt and condescension in Baylis’s tone. Baylis’s prejudice is nevertheless obvious. Lin’s interpreter includes both the Commissioner’s content and tone (also contemptuous). The discussion ends in a stalemate. Lin dismisses his interpreter and Baylis to talk with Robin privately. He asks Robin if there is any hope of constructive talks to resolve the issue of opium smuggling. Robin answers truthfully that there is not because the British do not see Chinese people as human. Later, explosions occur all along the docks as Lin burns all of the opium in the port. Lovell blames Robin and almost attacks him in front of everyone.
The expedition hastily departs on a freighter ship to England. Robin and his father argue at the start of the trip, and Robin realizes that Lovell thinks of him as a tool instead of a person. When Robin questions Lovell again about his mother’s death, Lovell says Robin’s mother was negligible because she was Chinese (he uses a slur when referring to her). Lovell says he thought having children was a kind of translation of his English blood to his sons’ Chinese blood, but now he believes that “there is no raising you from that base, original stock” (320).
The argument between the two reaches a climax when Lovell refuses even to say Robin’s mother’s name. Robin feels explosive anger. When Lovell stands and gestures as if he is going to attack with a silver bar, Robin does the same with the bar that Griffin used to kill Evie. When Robin utters the match-pair, the force of the bar kills Lovell. Ramy, Victoire, and Letty break into the room. Rather than report Robin, they begin planning a cover-up. No matter their conflicts, they are loyal to him.
The events in this section test the cohort’s bonds of friendship. Robin begins to question the possibility of Interracial and Intercultural Friendship. In addition, Robin is finally forced to choose how complicit he will be in the British Empire’s oppression of others.
The fault lines in the cohort’s friendships crystallize on the night of the ball. The responses to the assault on Victoire and Letty reveal a great deal about how each character sees the possibility of friendship across racial and cultural lines. Ramy’s defense of “our Victoire” (246) shows that his affiliation with Victoire supersedes the one he has with Letty. The conflicts between Letty and Ramy are present in the previous book and this one, and they are rooted in a difference of opinion about the role of British imperialism in India. Ramy’s family experienced direct harm under the British Raj, but Letty believes that imperialism is a civilizing force. He feels less responsible to her as a friend as a result, and his reaction to the assault shows that he doesn’t see Letty as one who needs protection. Ramy’s friendship with Letty is the weakest bond in the cohort.
Letty’s response to the assault reflects her sense that she has been left out in the cold by the other three because she is white and English. Letty identifies with Victoire on the basis of gender, but she is colorblind when it comes to race, so much so that she fails to notice the racist aggression Victoire faces. She seems incapable of understanding that Victoire faces overlapping oppressions. Her inability to recognize the role that race plays in the sexual harassment at the party makes her a poor ally.
Robin recognizes that Letty’s colorblindness impedes true friendship when he comforts her after the ball. As she processes the events of the night, her focus is on herself, specifically Ramy’s refusal to violate taboos around race and national origin to date her. She takes this as a personal affront rather than a survival strategy on Ramy’s part. Robin pictures himself “fading into the background of a painting” (249) as he comforts Letty, a reference to the presence of racial Others in British portraiture. Others often appear as servants and helpers, but they are rarely the focal point of such paintings. Letty assumes that her feelings and hurts should take center stage. To be there for her, Robin has to stuff down what he experienced that night. There is a lack of mutual empathy, in other words, and without that, there is no overcoming the gap between Robin and Letty’s experiences of the world.
Ramy’s interlude also sheds light on why it is so hard for members of the cohort to sustain friendships across their differences. Ramy experiences double consciousness in being both Indian and not-quite British. He is aware of the prejudice that shapes how the British see him. He masks his identity to fit in, but this approach comes at a great psychological cost. He connects with Hermes in part because he cannot get what he needs from his cohort. Kuang doesn’t reveal how Victoire was recruited into Hermes, but she presumably joined for the same reasons as Ramy. In order to survive, Robin, Ramy, and Victoire have to lie by omission; that is, they keep Hermes a secret from Letty. Robin’s choice to keep the secret from the other two shows how living with prejudice can damage even the most intimate relationships between oppressed people. Their secrets from each other set the stage for great betrayals later.
Robin makes several choices that betray his commitments and relationships in this section. He betrays the ethics of translation by leaving out the worst of Baylis’s racist and nationalist comments during negotiations with Lin. When he tells Lin that Baylis and the British will never come to terms with him due to racism, he further betrays his professional responsibility by damaging the negotiations. From the perspective of British interests and Lovell in particular, Robin has failed at this job to support the interests of the British empire. Robin has other loyalties, however. When he tells Lin that there can be no dealing with the British because of Britain’s deep-rooted racism, he is providing a more accurate cultural context for his act of interpreting. Robin’s words are powerful and consequential, and Lin’s decision to burn the opium is the direct result.
The power of truth telling emboldens Robin to challenge Lovell overtly about Robin’s mother and his role as a translator. Lovell tells his own truths, which are the truths of colonization and imperialism. He describes having children with Chinese women as an act of hereditary translation in which his offspring will overcome their Chinese heritage. For him, fathering children is a form of cultural erasure and just one of the forms of violence embraced by colonizers. He sees women like Robin’s mother as breeding stock who produce exploitable offspring. With this, Lovell reveals a hypocrisy in his logic: He views his children as objects rather than people. They will never be white enough or good enough in his eyes; they can only hope to win crumbs of approval by serving Britain against their own cultural interests. The dehumanizing language Lovell uses to describe Robin’s mother and Chinese culture is more than Robin can take. His murder (or accidental killing) of Lovell is a decisive declaration that he has picked the side of the colonized over the British. Book 5 thus marks a sharp change in Robin’s character arc.
By R. F. Kuang